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I Feel His Flow....Still
He frightened me
heightened me with talks of love
captivated my soul
never had love felt so...so...damn
he never let my heart down
except when he fell in love with me too
thats when I caught the blues
he played
cat and mouse with my emotions
we had many a lover's explosion
so many commotions
....and I thought it was me
he finally let me in on his secret
he knew he had my heart
but didnt know how to keep it
just knew he didnt want to give it up
we shared a bond
to be rivaled by none other
he, without a single touch
became my most perfect lover
he serenaded me from morning to eve
held my heart
all the hours in between
I found myself
not caring about much else
just pined and longed for his voice
He had me hooked
like the dust of the angels
like the base that sets you free
though no other drug could
stake a claim to my senses
he coursed through my veins
and left me reeling
his flow.....I find that I am still feeling
He has my heart
he always will
I just wonder if he loves me.....still
heightened me with talks of love
captivated my soul
never had love felt so...so...damn
he never let my heart down
except when he fell in love with me too
thats when I caught the blues
he played
cat and mouse with my emotions
we had many a lover's explosion
so many commotions
....and I thought it was me
he finally let me in on his secret
he knew he had my heart
but didnt know how to keep it
just knew he didnt want to give it up
we shared a bond
to be rivaled by none other
he, without a single touch
became my most perfect lover
he serenaded me from morning to eve
held my heart
all the hours in between
I found myself
not caring about much else
just pined and longed for his voice
He had me hooked
like the dust of the angels
like the base that sets you free
though no other drug could
stake a claim to my senses
he coursed through my veins
and left me reeling
his flow.....I find that I am still feeling
He has my heart
he always will
I just wonder if he loves me.....still
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Permalink Reply by PHILLYSWEETS on -
this was beauty ma i love this write
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Permalink Reply by RodB on -
So many times........ I read this and wonder..... Could it get any better! And line by waking line it does. All of your poems grow to a rising plain.... and never plateau... It just keeps on going through the stratosphere. Simply Amazing Sable.... simply amazing
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Permalink Reply by LaTrishia Outland on -
This was great! You write very very well. Be blessed
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Permalink Reply by OneLove on -
Well alrighty now, Sable. Like Rod said, this takes your mind to a diff level. Heartfelt indeed.
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Permalink Reply by Dark on -
Feeling the level... This one, twilight in the middle of the daytime... I can only keep the memories warm if written in stone by ice...
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