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lol, cute i like.
THIS IS FLY .THE ENDING ADDED A TWIST ,FIRE MA FIRE
If I could curse to give a synopsis of this poem it would be....D@MN! but since we can not curse... And I shall be as lyrical as I can possibly be...
This poem.... wow its so good I can't respond... I mean the tactfulness of this poem from the way it transitioned from the beginning to the climax of the ending... My word. Did you have gasoline in your pen, keyboard, computer, etc. This is beyond hot. You put my play on playa poem to shame. hahaha... Very nice
My imagination is going to get me got... I really enjoyed this, Rod was right, the play on playa play on his id receives a blow from this one... mine did too... RodB, say it with me "Challenge!" Please join Dark... and the Light of it : The Hidden Beach Family Soul Session Group... I think you will set it off right nicely...
God Bless,
Dark (Right now imagining the poem was about me... I do go well with tea...)
Thanks! Glad it was received well. I'm new to the site, where can I locate the group?
Dark said:My imagination is going to get me got... I really enjoyed this, Rod was right, the play on playa play on his id receives a blow from this one... mine did too... RodB, say it with me "Challenge!" Please join Dark... and the Light of it : The Hidden Beach Family Soul Session Group... I think you will set it off right nicely...
God Bless,
Dark (Right now imagining the poem was about me... I do go well with tea...)
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