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She nodded, Yes that was it…
(Right now... I'm figuring... I am in seclusion with the woman of my dreams, playing a game that could backfire and then it dawns on me... She lied to me first... but aside from the tit for tat... obviously she was interested enough to give her undivided attention... so in reality either things just got lame, or this was never a fantasy... and I lost my mind trying to get into hers...)
She nodded, Yes that was it…
As if in agreement after saying “I’ll, bet”
But now I’m getting third thoughts…
“So let’s go on down the line”, I say… “starting with the check”
She, still hasn’t answered my questions yet…
I stare intently…
She starts to break a sweat…
It’s been almost two minutes
And hot in this utility room
Her yellow blouse is getting wet
(said She...)Let me see that piece of paper again…
It can’t be real
Ok…, the check...(yeah I know corny right...) she states, really? For three mil?
As I asked before, what is your take?
It is not real!
As the tiny check pieces rain to the floor
At least I know how she feels…
Tearing more and more away
I’m guessing she’s wondering my deal…
I point away to the last piece… and ask
Is that your name?
She screams “How did you?!”
What, know you were single?
No!
Know my first and middle name…
Simple
The waitress…
You tip well…
But what a waist…
“So the check was real?
And I just blew three million dollars?”
No your abs are showing through your shirt
And everything else, except your neck behind your stiff starched collar
Her eyes changed color… again...(I must be losing it)
Ok now that’s just weird…
What!?
Your eyes Nicole Marie, your eyes
Copyright ©2009 Victorious Dark (Real Name is the meaning)
She nodded, Yes that was it…
As if in agreement after saying “I’ll, bet”
But now I’m getting third thoughts…
“So let’s go on down the line”, I say… “starting with the check”
She, still hasn’t answered my questions yet…
I stare intently…
She starts to break a sweat…
It’s been almost two minutes
And hot in this utility room
Her yellow blouse is getting wet
(said She...)Let me see that piece of paper again…
It can’t be real
Ok…, the check...(yeah I know corny right...) she states, really? For three mil?
As I asked before, what is your take?
It is not real!
As the tiny check pieces rain to the floor
At least I know how she feels…
Tearing more and more away
I’m guessing she’s wondering my deal…
I point away to the last piece… and ask
Is that your name?
She screams “How did you?!”
What, know you were single?
No!
Know my first and middle name…
Simple
The waitress…
You tip well…
But what a waist…
“So the check was real?
And I just blew three million dollars?”
No your abs are showing through your shirt
And everything else, except your neck behind your stiff starched collar
Her eyes changed color… again...(I must be losing it)
Ok now that’s just weird…
What!?
Your eyes Nicole Marie, your eyes
Copyright ©2009 Victorious Dark (Real Name is the meaning)
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Permalink Reply by Dark on -
I think your decision is wise... i'm not done yet... besides, I value your opinions and I know you do not waste your words. I await your honesty...
Genaya Brown Peace Queen Poet said:Very nice Dark, I am just afraid to comment. Though lovely.
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Permalink Reply by Natural Diva on -
Very interesting...It's starting to play out like a movie in my mind, yet I'm a little confused about the check...Can't wait for the finale!
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Permalink Reply by Dark on
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I concluded this a while back but failed to place it in the forum for all to see... check my profile... i think it may be there somewhere...
Natural Diva said:Very interesting...It's starting to play out like a movie in my mind, yet I'm a little confused about the check...Can't wait for the finale!
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