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Soul Ties... Your fate… My fate…, some how still affected. Sublime…

Chances are for you, this was really unexpected
Yet here you are looking back to what once was
You left what may have aft neglected, grown to be
A sore and bitter man you feel you still respect…

But why; you ask now… Still unsure how, things have come to be.
Remembering our past and how we spoke of together eternally
You proposed to me… then started the game. To take my role
Steal my vision, lay me to waste, boosting the distortion... your prism

Your fate… My fate…, somehow still affected. Sublime…

Given the case unbeknownst to you or I… The enemy disguised
Allowed for us to think of our ways differently… masques the lies
Hate is a word you used disguised as love, until… you believed the two were the same.
I condoned the hatred, felt the inner love and never complained

Each time I died a little… became susceptible to the enemy within… then
For a time it was grand…, me pleasing you constantly… greater each time.
Impervious to your devised weapon as if by higher design…
So now came the matter, which is still hard for you to define.

Your fate… My fate…, some how still effected. Sublime…

You now think of tomorrow… knowing what will not be there
Grasping your body… in ways we used to share…
Clinically you think about how you orchestrated our demise
Granted it was sweet indeed… but did you think of my creed?

Brilliant! I know you are, but what am I? The mental game…,
turned morbid in the exchange. Test me you did…
And yourself as well… But you had to push it…
Push it to fail, Thinking we could return… though love still prevails

Your fate… My fate…, some how still infected. Sublime…

Soul Ties… yes, I found the cause… now one last game.
Incase by chance you know who I am… Followed me closely
As I know you have. Sensing your call I pause…
I know you know I’m happy. This is not a ruse. But our Souls… abused.

Ties together, bonds must be broken. God help us both… The end is here.
Why do you still haunt me? God forbid… my love receives the fate of your own.
Your loss is not my gain. Of Sin rejoice I abstain… misery loves company…
Of which I am no longer apart… I prayed God break our Soul Ties…The end is here.

Your fate… My fate…, some how no longer affected. Still Sublime…

God Separated our Soul Ties...

Copyright ©2009 Victorious Dark (Real Name is the meaning)

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Genaya Brown Peace Queen Poet said:
Darn it Dark! you see what happens when a sistah slows down and pays attention for a change, she wakes up greeted by great poetry.........Wow Beautiful

Thanks Sis much love... What happened on here? did everyone Twitter away?

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wowwwww amazeing

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PHILLYSWEETS said:
wowwwww amazeing

I'm glad you enjoyed... SO... the time is here? where all my people at?

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wow! makes me think it has sumthng to do with being HIV positive, but then again it's poetry. NICE!!

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The Icon-Zamo said:
wow! makes me think it has sumthng to do with being HIV positive, but then again it's poetry. NICE!!

Thanks for the drop. I really appreciate...This Poem does have to do with relationships and premarital SEX. It very well could be a virus like HIV but even if it is not, there are repercussions and consequence that cannot be solved by just breaking up and not speaking. Soul Ties are real and every one a person sleeps with is forever connected spiritually.... unless God breaks that bond. You may find, if indeed you have done so find a person you've involved with intimately appearing in your actions and habits... it starts small but later you may find yourself doing things familiar to you that you've never personally experienced before... Seemingly that person has grown on you... but in you is where they are.

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Dark, this was an amazing piece of work! Loved every word!

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Genaya Brown Peace Queen Poet said:
Dark said:
The Icon-Zamo said:
wow! makes me think it has sumthng to do with being HIV positive, but then again it's poetry. NICE!!

Thanks for the drop. I really appreciate...This Poem does have to do with relationships and premarital SEX. It very well could be a virus like HIV but even if it is not, there are repercussions and consequence that cannot be solved by just breaking up and not speaking. Soul Ties are real and every one a person sleeps with is forever connected spiritually.... unless God breaks that bond. You may find, if indeed you have done so find a person you've involved with intimately appearing in your actions and habits... it starts small but later you may find yourself doing things familiar to you that you've never personally experienced before... Seemingly that person has grown on you... but in you is where they are.

Hmmmmm. I heard about that.... a female friend of mine told me that this guy she used to date used to like gently rub her upper lip like the rim of his lip when he was thinking and now at times she finds hers elf doing it also..... I thought that was kinda deep, I was like wow that must have been some serious chemistry between you two she was like yeah and started talking bout how much of a cool cat he was and all that girl stuff.... I was like wow that's deep..... so what's the remedy for God to break a soul tie again?

Prayer and letting go. But that is what is hardest about the whole thing... how can you let go of what is now a part of you? In case I missed this before, i will share what I may not have earlier... Repentance, and clarification that the two of you may have had similar traits before you met... This being said I ask you be careful and sure you are asking for your true need in the matter.

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Natural Diva said:
Dark, this was an amazing piece of work! Loved every word!

Thanks much, I appreciate the love.

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Glad to be here... I will post more later!

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Im not ready for this....the finality of what must be. Im hurting as I read this, this is the truth, but oh how painful this truth is. My soul is tied in knots, and funny how when I try to unravel them, the more tied the knots become! I read this in hope of finding ease, and still, there is pain. One day when I read this, I, as you have, will one day find triumph. I believe this, Twin! There is beauty in your pen, beautiful pain....but beauty just the same!

Sable

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Sable2 said:
Im not ready for this....the finality of what must be. Im hurting as I read this, this is the truth, but oh how painful this truth is. My soul is tied in knots, and funny how when I try to unravel them, the more tied the knots become! I read this in hope of finding ease, and still, there is pain. One day when I read this, I, as you have, will one day find triumph. I believe this, Twin! There is beauty in your pen, beautiful pain....but beauty just the same!
Sable


Twin Sis... you have to take a back seat and let God take the burden from you... There is nothing you can do about God's work but you can accept it... And thank Him for what is already done that you cannot see... Then your knots will become tiers in a ladder for your climb to your next level...

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